For Yuleth

There is one problem I have with it: the breasts, they're all sorts of squished together when her pose wouldn't require it, additionally I don't believe that's how they'd look resting, they lack the shape gravity would give them, the rest of the image is fine, bland and unoriginal but fine and pleasant. Colour would really perk this image up but as line work it's presentable, but the breasts let it down, they simply seem amateurish so I would suggest life drawing yourself some tits, study them like a 13 year old boy would because there's all sorts of factors that go into how breasts look in different situations, they are after all just fat with nipples on them, anyway, I don't think that top would be THAT skintight, seriously, do some life drawing of the female form, it'll do you some good lass.

I could bitch about the pose but eh, a pose is a pose, it looks a little un-natural, yes, but I don't think normal people would pick up on it, just overcritical artists would, I like her outfit though, very nicely detailed and designed, though I think I may be biased because a girl in a skirt is my weakness.