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second look by chicharrria second look by chicharrria
This is an entry for :iconvanillecream:'s contest: [link] :meow:


The theme's about first meeting.... so what I came up with was that Kylie and Vance passed by each other and after they are a few feet away, both of them turned their heads to take a second look (erm like ... "I wanna see that person's beauty once more!" running in their heads) ... at the same time so~~ :blush:

First meetings like this is so "initial" that the next meeting would be like... "hey! you were that pretty person from yesterday!"

lolwhut because this little cute event happend to me in real life~ :3

I edited this PS so that there'd be bright stuff but i'm not sure if it's the level that's gonna hurt your eyes or something....

I used usual stuff too~ [link]

OCs belong to *VanilleCream ~
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:icon20tourniquet02:
An amazing piece you have there! And the theme you've chosen is very well portraited in your piece! Now, allow me to proceed with the critique.

The first meeting between two people can be the reason of many.
It may be the cause of them falling in love with each other, becoming friends or enemies. It is the first impression that two or more people give to another, the circumstances under it happened and the first reactions to this meeting.

About your piece, it can be clearly seen that these two young people are the opposite both in sexes and in appearance. The boy seems to be an ordinary one, as he casually dressed while the girl is more formally. The boy stands before the rays of sun while the girl has chosen the shadow of a cherry tree. Between them, there is the ocean, separated into two parts, the one where the rays of sun fall and the other one darker under the sky's clouds. But, even if both the ocean and the sky seem to separate these two young people, in fact, they bring them closer to each other. This can be assummed also by the cherry tree's leaves flowing towards the boy's side and the rays of sun falling on the girl's back. The cloudy sky shows the mixed feelings these two have. Even though they are turning their backs to each other, at the same time, their looks are meeting. Both of them, being confused about themselves can't help but stand in their positions.

About the visual impact, I have to say that the piece is very clear. Both the picture and the message can be transfered to the viewer. The technique may have minor problems, but over all is good enough. The vision of this picture is clear enough. As for the originality, it can be assummed that it's a clever way to portray characters that aren't yours while using your own ideas and imagination. That makes it original as well!

The piece is amazing. Best of luck with the contest. :)
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:icontg7angel:
tg7angel Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Love This!
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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:iconactsofart:
ActsofArt Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very lovely.
beautiful colors and lighting.
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!
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:iconmythicphoenix:
MythicPhoenix Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely lighting.
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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:iconprincess-coco-154:
Princess-CoCo-154 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is amazing, really amazing! :O_o: also love the coloring very much
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks ~
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:iconprincess-coco-154:
Princess-CoCo-154 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem!!^^
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:iconanyelika:
Anyelika Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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:iconmysteryblackbunny:
MysteryBlackBunny Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwww cute !!!
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:meow:
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:iconnuboru:
Nuboru Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
The light is just perfect!
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that's good to know! i somehow thought it's a bit fail
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:iconmanta06:
manta06 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh my!!! the background is so amazing!!!! awesome work!!! >w<
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww! im glad you liked it
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:iconmanta06:
manta06 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
of course!! this is an example of perfectly awesome work!!
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
perpendicular to hard work, i guess. ^^
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:iconmanta06:
manta06 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hard work and awesome art..LOL XD
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
eeeh~ you could put it at that. ^^;
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:iconmanta06:
manta06 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
just admit it!! haha XD
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well, okay. XD
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:icon20tourniquet02:
20Tourniquet02 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Beautiful entry!
Just one tip!(Please, drop down the level of brightness! It ruins the pic! Add some contrast instead!)
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks~ oh~ i did an adjustment so i'll post the updated stuff in a bit...
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:icon20tourniquet02:
20Tourniquet02 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Ok!
So that I can comment properly!:la:
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
there goes~
please let me know if there's needing something :meow:
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:icon20tourniquet02:
20Tourniquet02 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
ok!!!I'm going to check it once more!:)
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeahy~
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:icon20tourniquet02:
20Tourniquet02 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
I did!:la:
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:<-----tightly you can't hardly breathe
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:iconkc-project:
KC-Project Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome!
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks~
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:iconkazukishinta:
KazukiShinta Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
ayiiiiii!!!!^^ somehow nakakarelate ako dyan^^
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kiiiii~~ :D
pakwento naman kuya... lol
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:iconhikizuu:
hikizuu Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahhh I love the colors! The light source is so amazing *w*
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww... thank you...
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:iconshuur0u:
SHUUR0U Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
beautiful<3 I especially love the effects of the tree * A *
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omg~ thanks~ :hug:
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:iconalexandrath:
AlexandraTH Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
I totally love her pink hair :love:
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:iconchicharrria:
chicharrria Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah~ i liked how it turned out too~ :nod:
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