Shojo line 1

Hello guys... hehehe~
This is one of my new artworks that i made during the lecture time at school, yup.... i wasn't paying attention at all because the teacher sucks anyway. LOL.

This is still uncolored and i really hope you guys would comment which one needs repairing in this artwork so that i could improve line work deficiencies before i could this one colored.

As of now, i won't tell who's OC this is, which contest this is part of and what the theme is about! Because this should be a surprise but... You could guess... hehe!

Thanks~!